Friday, February 24, 2012

"Spill Words Onto the Page"

We are so fortunate to have Mr. Richard Newsham with us for the next five Fridays to help us understand the beauty of poetry. Today he introduced us to the beginning steps of how to write poetry. He did a great job reassuring us all that we all have a voice to share with others. Today, our first session, included reading some great poems and writing one with his assistance.



and some amzing examples;

  • Angelina G Angelina G
    I Am a Stone

    I am a stone
    I started out in a big land
    Like a mountain
    Filled with other stones
    Just like me

    I drifted away to another land
    To a beach
    I was abandon
    Alone
    By myself
    But then that person came
    And picked me up
    I thought he was going to throw me into the water (luckily he didn’t)

    But to my surprise I was put in a moving vehicle
    It drove away
    We ended up in a house
    He put me in a flower plant
    Along with some other stones
    He made a circle out of us
    A circle of stones that surrounded the beautiful rose
    That was yet to grow up and die

    I am a stone
    A stone that can never be changed
    Never be caught
    Never be judged
    I run with the waves of fait

    Maybe I will fall
    And maybe I will rise
    Maybe I will live
    Or maybe I will die

    I am a stone
    A stone that can’t be tampered with
    I am rough
    Yet quiet
    I am smooth
    Yet shallow

    Maybe there will be times
    Times that I cannot explain
    But isn’t that the purpose of life?
    Isn’t that why we are here?

    I guess you can say
    That I have been waiting
    Waiting for that right moment
    When I get picked up
    And thrown into the sky
    I guess you can say that I have traveled
    For many, many years

    Years filled with memories
    Hope
    Destiny
    And Life

    Maybe I don’t want to be a stone
    Maybe I just want to wait until I rise up in the air
    And flop
    Right
    Into
    The ocean

    Today

  • Julia F Julia F
    The Stone
    My stone isn’t anything special.
    It is kind of like an egg,
    But not exactly.
    It’s partially smooth on one side,
    But on the other it has a rough edge,
    As if grains of sand were rubbed all over it.
    If I touch it,
    It makes my hands feel dirty.
    It doesn’t feel wanted
    It’s a dull color,
    Dull shape,
    Nothing anybody would want.
    It has a weird smell,
    Almost like a beach and rainforest,
    All wrapped up into one.
    I spin it,
    And it focuses on one part,
    As if that is where its heart is.
    When it stops,
    The spot disappears,
    As if there was that one moment of happiness,
    Where this one stone is able to express its feelings.
    But when the spinning stops,
    His life is over again.
    He’s done.
    It’s unwanted.
    If you stepped on it at the beach,
    You wouldn’t even bother to look down.
    You would just keep walking.
    This stone came from a beach,
    Yet it wish it hadn’t.
    It was washed up into the Ocean,
    Then landed on the rainforest.
    No one will keep this stone,
    No matter where he ends up.
    It wants to be with someone,
    He wants someone that loves him.
    He’s just silent.
    He doesn’t feel anything anymore.
    Its holding a secret, that no one can recover.
    He won’t tell anyone.
    When I knock it on the table,
    It has a lot inside.
    It’s solid, but not hollow.
    It definitely has a feeling,
    As if there is that one memory inside that he wants to yell out,
    But can’t.
    This stone is too afraid.
    I feel like this stone isn’t ordinary,
    It’s special.
    I care for this stone.
    I know what it can feel like,
    To feel unwanted.
    I know you just go on with life.
    No one is always wanted,
    Nor the way it wants to be.
    But this stone is itself.
    Not what other people want it to be.
    You may think you know who someone is,
    Or who they are,
    But you don’t.
    In their body,
    Their story is different.
    This stone is different than what other people think.
    He may be unwanted,
    And he may not like it,
    But this stone will just keep being a stone,
    And that’s just the way life is.

    Today
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